razzretina 1 points 3y ago
Whew, here's a huge wall of text! XD You don't need to answer any of these here, most of these questions are just things you might want to think about as you work on the story. I'm happy to go into more detail or explain other things if you want, just ask. :)
It sounds like in this society he really doesn't have much reason to be angry over being blind. Frustrated, sure, but self loathing and hating his sight loss over one thing, I'm not sure that's very realistic. Also, what prevents his soul mate from being able to find him easily? And why is this the first time in history where it's being noted that there's a problem with finding a soul mate when you're disabled? If this is an evovlved trait, wouldn't this have happened to hundreds of other people who are blind? What about people with perfectly functioning eyes but brain or optic nerve damage that effects how they see? As of now, there are about 500,000 blind people in the United States alone and several million of us worldwide, so I am very curious why your main character is the first one in history to have this issue. At the heart of the story, what is the purpose of the soul mate bond in this society? Is it worldwide/do all humans have this? Is the bond technology or biology or both? Why are certain people paired together (is it for breeding purposes? For social ones? Something else?)? What about asexual people, or polyamorous ones? Does the soul mate thing ever lead to someone being life bonded to an abusive partner?
As far as reading/writing goes, is there some reason he doesn't use braille or a screen reader or a print scanner on his phone? We have technology now that can read and translate human hand writing. It's not always the most accurate, but if this story is in the future, there's no reason it wouldn't be very accurate. I have the same questions about people carrying paper, too; why not have an ID chip or implant with that information so it doesn't get lost?
More blind people use canes than dogs, but if you want him to have a dog, write in that dog! :) Just be aware that using a guide dog IS as complicated as using a white cane and the relationship between dog and handler is a very deep one that is a lot more than just a dog and its master. I've had three guide dogs and I put my life in their care every time we go outside together; my dogs have saved me from being run over more times than I can count and I trust them to do things I would never trust another person to. I highly recommend reading Thunderdog, First Lady of the Seeing Eye, and Before Tuesday (not a guide dog but the relationship between Tuesday and her soldier is very similar) for good perspective on guide dogs and just because they're three really great, true stories. (Keep some tissues handy though. XD)
Personally, I would leave out echolocation for now. It's not very widely used among the blind and when it is the user is still using a white cane or guide dog with it. Right now it's kind of still in development and research and there's a lot of controversy surrounding it within the blind community. It might just make your story a bit too complicated and you don't necessarily want to distract from everything you have to explain with the soul mate stuff by having to explain this, too.
Blindness alone would not be enough to make your character so emotionally unstable that he can't travel. In fact, a big part of what all of us learn as blind people from a very young age is how to navigate and travel safely. We're humans first and foremost and we like to go out, to socialize, to watch movies by ourselves, etc. Depending on the state of the world in this future, I would imagine that transportation is something everyone has access to and it's definitely something your character would, realistically, have been trained to use (possibly better than most people; I know I get asked to be the "GPS" for my friends/family any time they visit my town because I know where I'm going here). If your character lives alone, he absolutely has to be able to get himself food and do all the things able bodied people do to function (pay bills, have friends, have hobbies, etc). What does this guy do for fun? What was his home life like before the story? Who are his friends? Is he still in touch with people he met at the guide dog school or where he went to school growing up? Etc.
Regarding phone technology, even today most of us use smart phones with text to speech screen readers that translate the words into a computer voice. Some people use Siri and voice commands, but just as many of us only use the screen reader. Here's a really quick and dirty video about using a screen reader I made just now. XD If anything doesn't make sense feel free to keep asking questions! :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rn2_iyZa9eU
KillerLag 1 points 3y ago
Generally speaking, if someone has the skills to get a guide dog, they should already have decent skills with a cane. You need better than average skills for a guide dog, since you need to keep your orientation, but you don't have a cane to check for surfaces and such. You'll often pay more attention to the sound to get oriented.