I read 2 1/2 chapters before I quit. While the spelling and grammar is good, the story isn't that good. There was nothing to pull me in. The beginning starts out like I should already know about these characters, no introductions, or really descriptions of the characters.

Now I don't know every blind person on the planet, but nobody I've talked to has had the urge to kneel down and feel the ground with their hands. I know I've never had that urge.

Three days after surgery to remove his eye and becoming completely blind, he already has a cane and knows how to use it? That's bullshit. And going to a party?! WTF. I've never had an eye removed, but I've had surgery on my both my eyes before (not at the same time) and let me tell you 3 days post op, I wasn't at all wanting to party. And I hadnt gone completely blind.

This story needs a lot of work to not only make it realistic, but also to describe characters and environment, to get a better flow, as those first few chapters are choppy and need detail. I won't say it's horrible, buts it's not good.