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advice for representation of blind characters (self.Blind)
submitted by hardlystraight28
im currently writing a story that is a mix of science fiction and high fantasy, and it involves an alien race that evolved to be blind. my main character is of this alien race, and the story will be told from third person limited in their point of view. in addition to this, the plot of the story has nothing to do with the character being blind.

i myself am not blind or visually impaired. that is why im turning to this subreddit for assistance.

i've been having my doubts about these characters, and i have a strong feeling that it isn't good representation given the fact that the characters are an alien race. if it is bad representation, do let me know because the last thing i want is to misrepresent/disrespect your community. i would also appreciate any advice for writing blind characters and how to write from their perspective.

EDIT: so... after some deliberation, i decided to remove the blindness from my alien race. i may have made too big of a leap in trying to provide diversity. i kept struggling and had to rewrite parts over and over and over, and i also realized that i had essentially chosen diversity over quality: my scenes ended up being horribly flat. i tried to make it work, but i found myself agonizing over scenes that would normally only take two or three hours to write. im very sorry to disappoint.
Tarnagona 5 points 2y ago
Hi. As someone who is partially sighted, I don’t see a race of blind aliens as inherently poor representation. They are not representative of blind humans, by definition. I do think there are going to be better or worse ways to write them, however, so here are a few thoughts.

First someone who is blind can do most things a sighted person can do, with adaptations, so don’t limit your aliens because of their sight, ie don’t make them weak and helpless because they’re blind.

Note, most people who are blind have some small amount of vision, whether that’s as little as telling light from dark, or something more detailed. Legal blindness is defined as a corrected visual acuity of 20/200 or less, ie 10% or less of full sight. When thinking of your aliens, you may want to consider whether they have any kind of vision at all, or just evolved without eyes.

Writers often describe what’s going on around a character in terms of vision. I remember reading a book where the POV character was blind, but the writer still wrote visual descriptions. It was a little jarring for an otherwise interesting novel. I’d suggest closing your eyes, or blindfolding yourself, and see what you notice when you’re not using your eyes. You’re not going to know what it’s like to be blind from this experience, because living something every day and learning to adapt to it is very different from putting on a blindfold for a while. But you may discover you notice more sounds that you usually ignore. You’ll use your sense of touch more. If someone is talking, you won’t see their facial expressions, but can read their mood in their tone of voice. Keep these things in mind when writing from your blind character’s point of view.

Note: someone who is blind doesn’t have better hearing, smell, or touch than a sighted person. However, we do notice more of those inputs to fill in information that a sighted person gets from their eyes. Aliens, of course, are a different story, and may have evolved heightened senses to compensate, like animals that have bad eye sight, but a keen sense of smell. It’s a bit of a tired trope for blind humans to have heightened senses, so I think it’s be kind of neat if your aliens didn’t have super powers.

I’d also do lots of research on how blind people navigate, do household tasks, live their lives while blind, as that will help inform on how your aliens could have figured out how to do things in a more authentic way.

Oh, and, if this is a story involving both sighted and blind characters, I’d really love if sight wasn’t treated like a magical super power. Because it paints a picture that the blind are lacking in comparison to the sighted, and that’s uncomfortable.

Note, this is only one blind person’s opinions, and I cannot speak for everyone. So others may have other suggestions, or different feelings about a book featuring a race of blind aliens.
persontypething 2 points 2y ago
I reckon it would be good to explain or at least touch upon just WHY the aliens evolved to be blind- what advantage that gave them where they are from but don't be shy to illustrate what difficulties it might cause when they explored other worlds as it were.

You could find out more about the assistive equipment and technology used by blind people and then "soup it up" to futuristic proportions, if you like.

You can also be inspired by RL eye conditions and how they affect sight (such as tunnel vision, loss of depth perception, loss of fine detail or colour perception) and transpose this to the lore of your creations.

I think you're dead right to be cautious and think it through carefully and there is a lot to take in- just be quite clear on why you wanted them to be blind and how it affects them and the story and you should get where you want to be, considerately and positively.
hardlystraight28 [OP] 2 points 2y ago
i fully intend for my blind characters to be just as badass and capable as my sighted ones; my main character is a pirate captain and they can shoot a whistling arrow like a boss. the race does have some vision: they can see outlines and shapes, but not much color or detail (this still varies between individuals). they also have sound based technology to assist them rather than any sort of super powers.

thank you for your advice!
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BlindLuck72 1 points 2y ago
I’d personally like the blind characters to be confident and powerful. Too many books/ movies plug blind people as the victim or some weak care yer like the blind bum on the street with his cane and coin cup.

Maybe show how they are able to do things better than other aliens or humans because they learned to do things differently.

I know it’s personal preference but it’s frustrating the general perception is helpless, weak, and puts full.
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